Location: York, Maine
I chose this location because it was the location of the wedding. However, the scenery was perfect for outdoor portraits. Thus creating natural lighting and well captured moments.
Photos:
- whats working? why?
- My photos are allowing me to show the process that I experienced behind the scenes, and then showing the product.
- what would you change/improve? why?
- I would like to gather more photos to help me tell my story, because the photos are half the message.
Story:
- whats working? why?
- I think this story is helping me express my learning experiences and growth with others.
- what would you change/improve? why?
- I would like to include the technical aspects that will build off of my experience.
Layout/Design:
- whats working? why?
- The layout helps follow my story better while also being flexible by evolving with my story.
- what would you change/improve? why?
- Once I work on my project, I need there to be more slots for photos to make sure I can show my full work.
Feedback:
“Perhaps find a specific order to help tell a consistent story. there’s a lot of photos from the same scene, but I bet you have more to tell a wider range of stories beyond the scope of just the wedding itself” – Julien
