Storyboard URL: I put some new clips into the storyboard with scenes that I thought were good and I could incorporate into my final draft.
5 Part Story:
- The starting point of the story is the establishment of the Penobscot river as the first river, or the first of this branch of water
2. The characters in this story is the river and its divergences, so smaller bodies of water in the area that the Penobscot feeds into. The other bodies of water are the children of the Penobscot and they want to live as a happy family
3. The conflict here is going to be the separation of the three bodies of water, from the train tracks splitting the water, and the drying up of the river
4. This separation is also going to be the change, or maybe the change can occur with the camera shots that shows some change in vibes
5. It ends with the sun setting on the family and the are not reunited