Page Analysis:
I like the usages of images, and how they are connected to the story but aren’t explicitly mentioned in the text. They add context to the story, but aren’t redundant.
Read then write a post about something that serves this purpose in your family’s life—maybe parents, children, grandkids all know it. What does place & people have to do with culture?
-In Pennsylvania, there is a small diner known as ‘Daves dream’ in Hollidaysburg, where my father grew up, and here his father grew up. Whenever visiting my grandparents, my family would routinely go there. It is steeped in the small town culture, and everyone there knows each other, and it is largely a family business (‘Dave’s’ family).
questions about story:
Is my story good
Yes 🙂
Is there narrative intrigue:
yes, add more about conflict with time
What would be most interesting to get more photos of/expand on
The animal life, other life cultivating within the farm
Tips on photo story
-wait for a moment
-look for detail
-lighting creates story creates art
-look for subject and base it around them
-This Changes How !!!
-be purposeful on how to compose with symmetry
Grab some tips from this and then either give yourself an assignment for how to change photographs
-Get more purposeful ‘moments’ with animals and nature
-closer details on some shots, rather than so many wide shots. More variation in composition
-be more intentional with lighting and time of day, most of my current photos are taken in broad daylight. Some more autumnal cloudy photos would be good to mix it up.
-Use more foreground framing, especially with wider shots
-I would love to try and get a good leading line photo, potentially with worn paths or something