Storymap:
https://storymaps.arcgis.com/stories/4ac59b829c164ecd825af482db657cdb
I think I’ve made a lot of progress with this. As I predicted back in my previous post, I reworked the structure of the story and pushed the details of the trip to the back burner while bringing the Don Quijote part to the forefront. I made it more personal to me with brief moments of dialogue (all of which I added creative flair to, so they aren’t verbatim for what Irene and others said). I did struggle with the Spanish parts of the story and the plot of it, as I endeavored to keep the scope centered around the idea of growing out of my confined shell. I’m not 100% satisfied with it, but I think it does well enough to get the point across.
I also wanted to include the audio samples of the Don Quijote quotes I collected, but for whatever reason, I couldn’t get the audio files to upload. I’ll try again for the next submission if I think it is worth it.
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I really enjoyed the way you told conversations in your story and I plan on using that to improve upon my own story.