My premise:
My story is about a man who walks in a bar and realizes that he needs a 360 turnaround on his life.
In this story we get to follow a man on this journey of self-love and what we can call self-fulfillment. he’s had everything since he can imagine not meaning he didn’t work hard for it. he had women, cars, boats name it. but for some reason he feels unhappy or empty. as he walks in the bar he had a conversion with the bartender that changed his perspective and the way sees life. he embarks on a new journey to find himself by leaving everything he had to start a new life in the east of Africa.
My premise:
My story is about [[a man]] who walks in a [[bar]] and realizes that he needs a 360 turnaround on his life.
a Man
This man is a 25 year old, He looks like he’s got his life together you know, he is going thru [[life]] nomarly but he feels a sense of emptiness, he can’s shake that feeling of unease.
>[[Go back->Pemise-Kevin Nishimwe]]
Bar
As he was going on about his usual day,it suddenly started pouring he finds himself infront of this long door with a lot of neon colored lights. he enters to shelter from the [[rain]].
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rain
He walks up in the bar drenched in rain, takes a seat at the bar and he **exhales** !! his emptiness feeling grew the moment he sat in the chair. bartender asks: “Long day huh?” He responds: “day huh” **He smurks** “more like long week.” bartender: “what can I get [[you]]?”
life
for a 25 year old, he had everything I mean car, boats, name it. he did everything you can imagine but still nothing satsfied him the way he wanted; that feeling of unease still hang over him
>[[Go back->Pemise-Kevin Nishimwe]]
you
I don’t know what to put here yet.
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