See my suggestions for making a woods walk into a story–see if one of those gives you an idea. then write script, then edit for script.
I hear car sounds in second scene–especially as you walk toward road–do you want to include this as an insight of the story?
You might be able to craft a story from this same walk at different times of day?
Shift to horizontal is jarring–you will want to pick ONE orientation.
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See my suggestions for making a woods walk into a story–see if one of those gives you an idea. then write script, then edit for script.
I hear car sounds in second scene–especially as you walk toward road–do you want to include this as an insight of the story?
You might be able to craft a story from this same walk at different times of day?
Shift to horizontal is jarring–you will want to pick ONE orientation.