Nice use of a script to transform clips int a story. Try to make it more personal–what nature do YOU see?
“threads” dont awaken–try another metaphor? again what do YOU see–that is the story; ie the overlap of flowers, clover, aster, leaves and your insight.
I like that the sedum flower moves a bit thought he camera is steady. Why are flowers blooming in october? Look up “sedum” so you know its story
for this season maybe a tree in orange foliage would be better than green clover? esp if talking about “passing”
Good ideas but much it for a more personal connection with more specifics –try using naturalist to identify then research species, for example. ad your own personal quirky insights or feelings, etc.
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Nice use of a script to transform clips int a story. Try to make it more personal–what nature do YOU see?
“threads” dont awaken–try another metaphor? again what do YOU see–that is the story; ie the overlap of flowers, clover, aster, leaves and your insight.
I like that the sedum flower moves a bit thought he camera is steady. Why are flowers blooming in october? Look up “sedum” so you know its story
for this season maybe a tree in orange foliage would be better than green clover? esp if talking about “passing”
Good ideas but much it for a more personal connection with more specifics –try using naturalist to identify then research species, for example. ad your own personal quirky insights or feelings, etc.