The repetition of the two scenes makes a clear point about early rising–assuming enough sleep.
The snafus in the first part actually made me laugh–very funny; the actress is convincing in her sleepy adventures.
In the second part the actress is equally convincing in a happy, energetic mood.
You might consider some background music–maybe it’s different for each day? Aligning actions to good audio track may be your biggest challenge here.
The 5:29 am pre-alarm was a bit scary–maybe that’s too early?? This could be a goldilocks story where the too late and too early alarms lead to the SAME kind of day (same footage) , but the 6:00 wake up works perfect? Or was there another reason to have the third day?
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The repetition of the two scenes makes a clear point about early rising–assuming enough sleep.
The snafus in the first part actually made me laugh–very funny; the actress is convincing in her sleepy adventures.
In the second part the actress is equally convincing in a happy, energetic mood.
You might consider some background music–maybe it’s different for each day? Aligning actions to good audio track may be your biggest challenge here.
The 5:29 am pre-alarm was a bit scary–maybe that’s too early?? This could be a goldilocks story where the too late and too early alarms lead to the SAME kind of day (same footage) , but the 6:00 wake up works perfect? Or was there another reason to have the third day?