Video Link to First Draft: https://youtu.be/Svav7a_68no
Link to revised storyboard: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1imuZ028WKe8Z_cAI4ks_VoaZN-BMHjB-pyw2KkZxxfI/edit?usp=sharing
Video Link to First Draft: https://youtu.be/Svav7a_68no
Link to revised storyboard: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1imuZ028WKe8Z_cAI4ks_VoaZN-BMHjB-pyw2KkZxxfI/edit?usp=sharing
1 Response
Clear opening–STOP, and great use of color transition to signal scene shift. Focus on feet (metonym) and highly saturated wall work well.
Great sound effects
Clear establishing shots of walker, path, approach of metronome. Again we see only feet–nice repetition. Feet again indoors after metronome ticks.
Is the rush of daily life a dream?
Does the walker wake up? Again nice use of metonym (hand for person)
So the first walker was a dream–in crocks, while the second walker has sneakers and his writing pad. Good use of repetition and fast cut and saturated scenes for dreamlike sequence.
Excellent use of repetition with variations to suggest the change in character.
I’d love to see what the person writes at the end instead of STOP…
Sounds effects are great , and so is silence in between, but i wonder if some subtle background sounds or music would work?? Not sure. Maybe to distinguish two different walks?