My project is going to focus on how life thrives outside, the main character cannot go outside however I have not got clips for that yet I just have clips of the other character being happy outside.
Interesting premise of inside vs outside, but you might want to consider point of view. Who is seeing the outside if the inside character is inside? I dont see any happy people outside?
Do you want to alternate between inside & outside character views–and maybe juxtapose them somehow? You would have to pick a few topics/scenes to match…
Are the bugs metaphoric? They die when not let outside?
One way to do this is to capture multiple scenes from the window at different times of day–and have the scenes portray someting about the inner character. Then we wouldn’t need the elevator scene or person leaving.
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Interesting premise of inside vs outside, but you might want to consider point of view. Who is seeing the outside if the inside character is inside? I dont see any happy people outside?
Do you want to alternate between inside & outside character views–and maybe juxtapose them somehow? You would have to pick a few topics/scenes to match…
Are the bugs metaphoric? They die when not let outside?
One way to do this is to capture multiple scenes from the window at different times of day–and have the scenes portray someting about the inner character. Then we wouldn’t need the elevator scene or person leaving.
I dont know what the orange blob is.
Try to find the story and edit for the story.