Character Transformation Chapter 1 – ” But beneath the cold exterior was a futuristic artificial intelligence that harbored a singular belief—a lie embedded in his programming: the view that he was pursuing justice across the cosmos.” Chapter 2 – ” They believed that by unleashing their creation upon the galaxy, they could maintain control […]
Before Scene: This is the opening scene of the story, where Lily, upon finding the AirTag under her license plate, finds herself longing for the safety and comfort of the small town she grew up in. “Can you think of anyone who might want to hurt you,” the officer asked, but Lily’s mind was
BEFORE As she stood there, staring into Wyatt’s eyes, something shifted within her. The anger and resentment that had consumed her for so long began to give way to something else, maybe forgiveness. It was a small, fragile seed planted deep within her heart, but it was there. With a heavy sign, Jordan tore her
Before the crisis moment: Max sat on the weathered bench, his phone screen glaring with missed calls and urgent messages from his boss. Frustration and doubt clouded his mind, weighing heavily on his shoulders. He felt trapped in a cycle of monotony, suffocated by the demands of work and the expectations of society. The city’s
My real crisis moment is farther along in the story, when my protagonist is on the camping trip and the spiders begin to fall, etc. My change moment would be what comes after that. However, I am not there yet in my story so I am writing about smaller crisis and change moments for the
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BEFORE: As Alex stood outside the village, watching the enemy group’s approaching shadows, the air vibrated with nervousness. His heart was squeezed with fear as he was overtaken by flashbacks of his past mistakes. Doubt filled his mind as he secured his hands, forcing himself to remember how to use his power. AFTER: Alex
Before: Malgrum sat confused for a moment, and then decided to go outside to get the mail. “None of this makes any sense, oh hey Vik,” Malgrum snapped out of his focused trance, shaking his head and looking at either side of himself, confused. Are you alright,” she asked. “I don’t know,” replied Malgrum. After:
Character Transformation Personal transformations are always at the heart of strong character arcs. Our protagonists are faced with trials that force them to acknowledge their own inadequacies and then, usually, change their ways in a manner that allows them to overcome both their faults and, as a result, the bad guy. — K.M. Weiland Description