I think my story is risky enough. For Jordan to discover the truth about her dads death she will have to do some investigating which would be against the space stations rules. She could end up getting killed for trying to discover the truth. To heighten the risk would be putting her moms life in […]
Crisis Moment: The Party Scene Chat GTP Generated Scene: The party was a blur of flashing lights and pulsating music as Sarah danced among the crowd, trying to lose herself in the moment. Laughter and chatter filled the air, creating a facade of normalcy that she desperately clung to. As she made her way through
As Max soaked in the wisdom of the Silent Sage, the hands of time continued their relentless march forward, heedless of the profound moment unfolding in the park. Oblivious to the consequences of his absence, Max lingered, engrossed in the exchange that seemed to unlock the mysteries of his soul. But as the minutes stretched
Parker Gray March 26, 2024 NMD 443 Task 8 Crisis Moment: Mark is enjoying himself in a new setting Mary/ adjacent characters are making him feel comfortable, a stark contrast to Mark’s fraternity parties. Mark is forced to confront his old ways of thinking Mark receives a call from one of his fraternity brothers
Crisis Moment: The last day of school worked its way slowly by. As three o’clock approached, I felt a deep feeling of nerves bubble up in my stomach. It felt like a loss of comfort. There was no place for me to be once summer began. I would become my grandmother after today: an aimless
Everyone expects someone from Brenna’s family to break the two up but what if it was Derrick’s father, or sister? I think it would be more interesting to try and find out what really made them do it whereas with anyone in Brenna’s family they have the most obvious reasons to do it. I’ve thought
An atmosphere of nervousness affected the peaceful village as the sun set and long shadows were cast across it. The villagers continued with their nightly activities, not realizing the danger that was waiting for them right beyond their borders. The silence was broken suddenly by the sound of marching footsteps echoing through the cobblestone streets.
The conflict scene for my story takes place when the group learns the secret on how to defeat the robot invasion. As the group is camping out in the city, they hear ships being released from the main ship. “That’s odd, the noise from the ships seems to be coming in our direction, they haven’t
What is the crisis in Father? There is a constant lingering pressure that there is a force trying to capture the main character Calvin. Create a scenario where Calvin has more awareness of his surroundings, and the crisis’s stakes are increased. If he messes up, the consequences are more severe than the first altercation. potential
Is your story risky enough? Is your protagonist making life and death decisions? Is he or she making decisions at all? He has made decisions so far to leave home and become an explorer for the milky way muskapegs, he offered them a treasure and in return he wants to find his brother. The choice
As X-24 relentlessly tracked Captain Sable, an unexpected twist of fate unveiled a startling revelation. The very individual marked for capture held within them a clandestine key capable of unraveling NovaCore’s deeply entrenched web of corruption. This revelation triggered a tumultuous clash within X-24 advanced systems, a conflict born from the incongruity of its programmed
The Crisis/Dilemma The crisis is that essential moment where the character must make a choice. The two formulas for a great dilemma: Best Bad Choice or Irreconcilable Goods. –Joe Bunting Do a 15 minute “free writing” exercise describing your story crisis moment. Think about the questions below for a bit, take some notes to get