Task – 9 Fox Gleason
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Character Transformation Chapter 1 – ” But beneath the cold exterior was a futuristic artificial intelligence that harbored a singular belief—a lie embedded in his programming: the view that he was pursuing justice across the cosmos.” Chapter 2 – ” They believed that by unleashing their creation upon the galaxy, they could maintain control
Before Scene: This is the opening scene of the story, where Lily, upon finding the AirTag under her license plate, finds herself longing for the safety and comfort of the small town she grew up in. “Can you think of anyone who might want to hurt you,” the officer asked, but Lily’s mind was
This first photo is the one I plan on using as my cover photo in shorthand. This is a photo I will be using it illustrate the main character Brenna. This photo of my male main character Derrick coaching his lacrosse team. A photo of Derrick and Brenna having a conversation regarding the future of
After months of dealing with an unknown stalker and cops who seem completely useless to help, Lily decides to take matter into her own hands. In the crisis scene, Lily finally knows the face of her stalker, but she still doesn’t know his name.
1) My character Alex is sitting on a bench and drawing. He is surrounded by people who are watching him. 2. 2). A picture of my character Alex, waking up from and lying on his bed looking at his drawing set. The drawing set he is looking at is next to the
BRENNA Derrick’s father’s house is not the mansion I expected it to be, but a brownstone in Beacon Hill, which I suppose is Boston’s equivalent of mansion living. The area is gorgeous, though. Derrick barely said a word during the two-hour drive into the city. Tension has been rolling off his suit-clad body in palpable
My real crisis moment is farther along in the story, when my protagonist is on the camping trip and the spiders begin to fall, etc. My change moment would be what comes after that. However, I am not there yet in my story so I am writing about smaller crisis and change moments for the
My grandmother was like a lamp. Her very presence would warm a room and invite you to sit next to her on the green arm chair. When my grandmother was around it always meant time spent together, sweet remarks, and always a cup of tea. Once she passed away, it felt like her curtains would
Crisis Moment: The last day of school worked its way slowly by. As three o’clock approached, I felt a deep feeling of nerves bubble up in my stomach. It felt like a loss of comfort. There was no place for me to be once summer began. I would become my grandmother after today: an aimless
Everyone expects someone from Brenna’s family to break the two up but what if it was Derrick’s father, or sister? I think it would be more interesting to try and find out what really made them do it whereas with anyone in Brenna’s family they have the most obvious reasons to do it. I’ve thought
What is the crisis in Father? There is a constant lingering pressure that there is a force trying to capture the main character Calvin. Create a scenario where Calvin has more awareness of his surroundings, and the crisis’s stakes are increased. If he messes up, the consequences are more severe than the first altercation. potential
My phone rings just after midnight but I’m not asleep. Infact, I’m barely in my pj’s yet as the second I came home from work, I grabbed my journal and got right back to work again. I put the journal down and checked the screen. It’s Derrick. Derrick: Can’t sleep. You up? Me: Is
My phone rings just after midnight but I’m not asleep. Infact, I’m barely in my pj’s yet as the second i came home from work, I grabbed my journal and got right back to work again. I put the journal down and check the screen. It’s Derrick. Derrick: Can’t sleep. You up? Me: Is

Self Revision I think I may need to dive deeper into why X-24 his program is messing up likeemphasize the moments where he begins to question the righteousness of his missions and showcase the evolving self-awareness I feel like I may need to describe Captain Sable’s actions or characteristics that challenge X-24’s programmed beliefs, gradually leading
First 1/4 of my story: My grandmother was like a lamp. Her very presence would warm a room and invite a person to sit on the green armchair next to her. When my grandmother was around it always meant time spent together, good conversation, and usually a cup of tea. Once she passed away, it
3. Will the First Plot Point seem favorable? If so, how will the complications turn out to be worse than the protagonist expected? The first plot point I intend on creating is Brenna finally meeting Derrick’s father during thanksgiving. The couple is going to go to Derricks house and it’ll be her first time meeting any of his
1. What major event will slam into your character’s Normal World and force him to alter his original plans? In the Alex’s village some magical creatures suddenly start causing trouble. They’re not usually a problem, but this time, they’re attacking the village and scaring everyone. Normal ways of dealing with them don’t work, and the villagers
For my story, I’d like to continue the story I created in NMD 343. The story revolves around the Main Character, Calvin, who has lost his memory. He finds himself pursued by a corrupt government lead by a single entity. Calvin must figure out his connection to this conflict, and put a stop to the
What major event will slam into your character’s Normal World and force him to alter his original plans? My main character’s only surviving grandmother will pass away in the beginning of my story. Or we will have found out that this has happened. The grandmother and the main character were very close due to her
Brenna’s ghost in this story going forward is her relationship with her dad. Brenna has this inner child in her that still admires her father and believes that he is a good man despite almost every interaction with him saying otherwise. She still has hope after the first story, seeing her father interact with her
Once upon a time in a small town, there lived a little boy named Alec and his faithful companion, a golden retriever named Maggie. Maggie had been Alec’s best friend for as long as he could remember. They were inseparable, sharing countless adventures and creating memories that would last a lifetime. Maggie was more than
1. Why does your character believe the Lie? Alex believes the lie because of a traumatic incident from his childhood when his artistic creations unintentionally caused chaos. The lack of control over the outcome of his art during that event planted the seed of doubt in his mind, making him question the safety and responsibility of
Ghost: Event , belief, etc The belief that the main character had about themself. In the hustle and bustle of daily life, doesn’t take time for themself to feel things, sweeps things under the rug. Maybe before the trip they are fighting with their boyfriend and something happens with their roommates or at work. Or
Plot: Main Character:(no name yet) -description: blonde hair, skinny, tall. -lie they believe: that they are healed from the death of their (grandparent? Roommate? Friend? Not sure yet) or that they don’t need to grieve. Puts on a good face, mother can sense the pain and brings her on this trip to find peace. -want
I have a few ideas for my story this semester. I could continue some aspects to my story last semester, and write more about Brenna’s relationship with her father like I originally intended and the effect of that on her relationship with Derrick. The only thing stopping me from doing that is how much I
TASK 1 One of the saddest moments in my life happened almost a year ago now. An intervention had occurred, forcing a ravine between me and my abusive ex boyfriend. During all of the police visits, and phone calls, and meetings, one of those stuck in my head as a painful experience. My mother
The following is based on a conversation I had recently. It was when I finally realized that however I was feeling about this certain situation was fine, after feeling like I had to feel a certain way. I don’t know how to emphasize my feelings or the importance of this conversation to me so I
Brain Dump: ~Consider characters, setting, conflict, themes, ideas. Anything that comes to mind… senses, colors, places, smells, objects, time periods, etc. Make a mess!~ 1/23/24 Person dealing with something and then going camping, forced to deal with it. -canoe through the small, tight stream, with each spider that falls and makes its way into
Commitment to do creative work everyday, at 8am, if I am able for 10 minutes. Compost Heap: ~Collect anything that interests you. Make Lists. What did you do today? What did you enjoy/hate about today? What did you listen to? What’s a lonely time in your life?~ 1/23/24: When I got to school

Honesty and Courage If you’re going to write…you have to be willing to do the equivalent of walking down a street naked. You have to be able to show too much of yourself. You have to be just a little bit more honest than you’re comfortable with… -Neil Gaiman, author of Coraline To practice