Before:
- Malgrum sat confused for a moment, and then decided to go outside to get the mail. “None of this makes any sense, oh hey Vik,”
- Malgrum snapped out of his focused trance, shaking his head and looking at either side of himself, confused.
- Are you alright,” she asked. “I don’t know,” replied Malgrum.
After:
- “No, we can’t, it’s too risky,” said Malgrum. “We’ve been doing fine, we’re alive, we’re happy, there is no point in risking all of that, or any of us.” “We have the knowledge and the strength, it’s our duty t0o,” replied Bitoku. “To hell with duty, what do we owe the rest of the world. They can fend for themselves just as I always have,” Malgrum rebutted. “But the world has had your back, look at us for example, we were just normal people that helped a stranger who needed it, you’ve always had others,” argued Bitoku. “How do you know, you have no idea what I’ve been through, what I’ve done. I lost everything and lived in agony by myself, for years, and here I am!” Yelled Malgrum.
- “Well, I guess I’m outnumbered, fine, let’s end this.”