Everyone expects someone from Brenna’s family to break the two up but what if it was Derrick’s father, or sister? I think it would be more interesting to try and find out what really made them do it whereas with anyone in Brenna’s family they have the most obvious reasons to do it. I’ve thought of the idea of a who dun it story but I think I want to stay with the rom-com vibes like the first story. That being said I’ve decided that Brenna’s family can’t just be the one with all the problems, and someones from Derrick family has it out for Brenna. I don’t exactly want to spoil who it is because this could add an element of suspense to my story, I plan on using a lot of foreshadowing to build up that suspense aspect so my next steps will be to go in and find some spots to spice up.