As a resolution to my story, I place Calvin further in unknown territory, past the point of no return. I end it off on a cliffhanger as I believe leaving it open ended really leaves a sense of unease in the reader, and has them create their own conclusions on what they think happened. I

Here is the Climax of the story. I created it to really drive a sense of suspense and unease in the reader Calvin finds himself wandering the mass of hallways in the complex. The concrete walls, tiled floor, and sterile air was all he saw for what felt like hours. However, just as he was

the Turning point in my story is after Calvin gets betrayed by his friend John. Its this moment when he realizes that he doesn’t have the luxury of being naive. Its up to him to figure out his place in the conflict he finds himself in. My story hit that point at the end of

Resolution   Chapter 1 – ” But beneath the cold exterior was a futuristic artificial intelligence that harbored a singular belief—a lie embedded in his programming: the view that he was pursuing justice across the cosmos.” Chapter 4 – ” Doubt, an unfamiliar sensation for a machine, stealthily crept into his circuits, triggering a profound

Climax   Chapter 3 – “One day, NovaCorp assigned X-24 a mission that would alter the course of his existence. His target was a notorious space pirate named Captain Sable, who had been causing chaos and disrupting NovaCorp’s operations in the outer rim.” Chapter 4 – ” As X-24 relentlessly pursued Captain Sable through the

“Can you think of anyone who might want to hurt you,” the officer asked, but Lily’s mind was elsewhere. Staring at the flashing blue light that flooded through the window from the cop cars outside, Lily found herself thinking of her childhood. Growing up in Willow Creek, a small, sleepy town in northern Maine, Lily

Crisis Moment: The Party Scene Chat GTP Generated Scene: The party was a blur of flashing lights and pulsating music as Sarah danced among the crowd, trying to lose herself in the moment. Laughter and chatter filled the air, creating a facade of normalcy that she desperately clung to. As she made her way through

Conclusion:   The stream spat us out of its tight hold into a bright clearing. Everything around us was lush and saturated. The birds chirped above us, the grass sang its summer song. I felt the Earth take a deep breath. I closed my eyes and felt the warmth fall over me.  “You’re a lovely

Resolution After Arno and ORG find a way of the harsh planet they end getting ot the final destination and face the antagonist and find the truth of what happened to Carlos and what the ceremony really is…

Story Climax:   Soon, we arrived at the stream. There was a small clearing looking out at the water that sparkled from the cast sunlight. As we got out of the truck and got the canoes ready, I started to feel a bit more relaxed. The birds were singing, the sun was warm on my

Climax there is a section where Arno and ORG get trapped on the harsh planet Skavantis, there they are betrayed by the Milky Way Muskapegs and left to fend for themselves against the Skags, interesting but sharp and scary creatures, covered with a hide of sharp crystals like armadillos. Here the story changes and Arno

Something I regret… I’ve had a lot of online friends, and I’m of the belief that online friends are no different from friends made in person. That being said, I wish I had used my time in high school and college more to make more friends. The idea of having friends over to hangout sounds

a planet covered in spikey rock formations all pointing in one direction, also having sandstorms a partially sunken black pyramid structure with strange symbology on it, in a jungle surrounded by foliage near a river a skeleton pirate captain wearing an all black uniform with purple flaming eyes sailing a ship in the clouds.

Parker Gray Task 11 NMD 443   Resolution Scene – The following morning, as I made my way back to the house, I steeled myself for the confrontation awaiting me.    As I entered, the atmosphere was tense, the aftermath of last night’s party still lingering in the air. Lip, his expression a mix of

Parker Gray NMD 443 Task 10   Climax Description- Within the climax, Mark is met with confrontation by one of his Frat brothers regarding his wherabouts, and is told to make a decision relating to where his current loyalties lie. Will he choose to avoid the confrontation? And choose himself? Or will he fold, and

The village rises from the dust of doubt and fear following a tense fight. The villagers assemble in the central square, watching Alex—who is now praised as a hero—address the group with looks of both happiness and amazement.  The villagers  surround Alex as he stands on an improvised platform and clap for him. His broken

Malgrum walked past his group of friends and approached the control panel. “Welp, let’s end this over with,” he said, starting to play with the controls. “These guys usually show up pretty quickly, they travel fast.” He finished punching all of the controls and the tracking beacon activated on the ship. After waiting a few

Brief Description of the Climax: Alex faces his greatest test at the story’s climax when the enemy group attacks his village on an enormous level. After several failed attempts, Alex at last reaches his strength at the crucial point, protecting the village and overcoming his own inner doubt and fear. Climax Scene: An approaching threat to the

Malgrum and Ryla started to make their way through a ship hanger, but the door across from them opened, revealing a whole platoon of robots. The robots started shooting at the duo, who start trying to run diagonally to another door. However, the door they were heading to opens, and even more robots come out.

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Parker Gray March 26, 2024 NMD 443  Task 8   Crisis Moment: Mark is enjoying himself in a new setting Mary/ adjacent characters are making him feel comfortable, a stark contrast to Mark’s fraternity parties. Mark is forced to confront his old ways of thinking Mark receives a call from one of his fraternity brothers

Parker Gray NMD 443 March 18, 2024 Task 7   The sun dipped low, casting a warm glow across campus as I sat outside the adjacent bodega in the car I’d owned since I was 16. Ethan, grinning ear to ear after successfully acquiring a 30 pack of beer with his botched fake id, was

BEFORE: As Alex stood outside the village, watching the enemy group’s approaching shadows, the air vibrated with nervousness. His heart was squeezed with fear as he was overtaken by flashbacks of his past mistakes. Doubt filled his mind as he secured his hands, forcing himself to remember how to use his power.   AFTER: Alex

*This is a first draft, better story telling will be implemented in the revision Several weeks pass Still reeling from John’s betrayal, Calvin distracts himself by helping the rebels in their tasks. Calvin and Sasha have become closer as a result of what had transpired. Sasha eventually rips the bandaid off and talks with Calvin

Before: Malgrum sat confused for a moment, and then decided to go outside to get the mail. “None of this makes any sense, oh hey Vik,” Malgrum snapped out of his focused trance, shaking his head and looking at either side of himself, confused. Are you alright,” she asked. “I don’t know,” replied Malgrum. After: