Author name: sadie.avellar

For the climax of my story, Jordan, Willow, and Rico all watched the video of Jordans father revealing what the secret was that got him killed. With wanting to spread awareness for what her father discovered. Jordan asks Willow to try to make it so everyone in the space station can see the video.  

BEFORE As she stood there, staring into Wyatt’s eyes, something shifted within her. The anger and resentment that had consumed her for so long began to give way to something else, maybe forgiveness. It was a small, fragile seed planted deep within her heart, but it was there. With a heavy sign, Jordan tore her

I think my story is risky enough. For Jordan to discover the truth about her dads death she will have to do some investigating which would be against the space stations rules. She could end up getting killed for trying to discover the truth. To heighten the risk would be putting her moms life in

Reading Ashley’s first draft gives me ideas to use present day devices in my story. Even though my story doesn’t take place in recent times. I’m sure the early generations on the space station has passed down stuff to family members to remember time before the space station.  

The space station hummed with a quiet intensity, the soft whirring of the machinery blending with the steady thrum of the life support systems. Jordan stood at the observation deck, her gaze fixed on the distant Earth below. From her view point, the planet appeared so fragile suspended in the silent embrace of the space

For the resolution of my story I really just want to focus on the aftermath of the video being leaked out for the space station to see. I want to describe what the council does in the face of a difficult crowd going after them. And finally describing how everything works out in the end.

2. What decision will lead your protagonist to the First Plot Point? Once the prisoners land on Earth Jordan quickly realizes that the space stations dropped them in the wrong area they were supposed to. They were supposed to be dropped off near a place named Mountain Haven, because it is known to the space stations that it

My character believes that the people living in the space stations are the only people left of the human race because there has been no form of communication from the space stations to Earth, and since almost 100 years have past everyone in the space stationed have just assumed that anyone who didn’t make it

For the prompt, regret something you did, I work at a Shaws grocery store in my home town. I have been working there since I was in high school, going on five years or so now. I got promoted to a customer service representative a couple of years after I started working and have been