I think my story is risky enough. For Jordan to discover the truth about her dads death she will have to do some investigating which would be against the space stations rules. She could end up getting killed for trying to discover the truth. To heighten the risk would be putting her moms life in danger. Even though her mom knows the truth about the dads death it doesn’t mean Jordan knows. She thinks she’s trying to protect her mom and avenge her dad. Jordan will have to make hard choices to discover the truth and she won’t like the truth either but in the end it will help grow her character
